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Thursday, July 27, 2023

Chapter 4 of The Eagle’s Claw – A Guest Post

 dontravis.com blog post #610

 


 



Last week, Don Morgan, a fellow Okie, posted Chapter 3 of his novel The Eagle’s Claw. Today, we’ll see part of Chapter 4. The narrative is rather long, but I hope you’ll stay with it to the end.




                                                                                                


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THE EAGLE’S CLAW

By Donald T. Morgan

Chapter 4

Blood and gore from the Chandler boy’s dead horse gunked Román’s arms all the way to the elbows. His grandmother had roused him early to beat the sun to Blind Man’s Arroyo, hoping to reach Pedro before predators did. Once the horse was butchered, they hauled heavy chunks of meat on a travois back to the gowa where they jerked what they couldn’t eat right away.

The sun was at its high point before his grandmother got around to cooking a meal. As soon as they finished eating, she told him to wash up and go to the white man’s ranch.

He bolted outside, claiming he had to go for his run. She couldn’t object to that. She was the one who insisted he “train” every morning. Nobody else did, but then no one else had a grandmother who lived in the past.

At the base of the yellow-hued bluff that gave Rising Rock its name, he went into a loose-limbed trot to warm his muscles before breaking into a run. In his mind’s eye, others raced alongside him on this steep path where he imagined the Ancients had ascended from the underworld. They’d fought the Indah in these mountains. Indah—the outsider, the enemy. Once, that was anybody who wasn’t one of the People. Now it meant the white man.

The trail reached a hogback and dropped into a shallow canyon before looping back to the south. Pride demanded his ragged, rubber-soled sneakers beat the same steady rhythm at the end of his race with the sun as at the beginning. Upon re-entering the glade, he paused to peek through the door of the wickiup. His grandmother was gone.

Still huffing slightly, Román considered hiding out instead of going to the ranch house. He could claim the man hadn’t given him anything. That was no good. He had a strong hide-behind-face, but she could see through it every time. Surrendering, he rinsed away sweat and blood with water from a pot and walked down the rutted wagon road to the small meadow where he’d hobbled the mare last night.

Great piles of eiderdown clouds mushroomed high over the Chacons, an uncertain promise of a break in the weather, as the paint slipped into her easiest gait. Román placed a hand over his flat belly, exploring the hard knot that grew with each step. Yesterday there’d been a need. Today he could think of a hundred reasons not to go to the white man’s house.

Once he turned off the highway onto the gravel road, the ranch headquarters loomed before him. He reined in and stared. The big, white building must be like living in the Reformed Church down in the settlement. He tried to match the house to the man he’d seen yesterday. That hadn’t been a hiding man. Must be the woman who wanted to live in a fortress.

If the rancher didn’t give him a trinket, he’d have to swipe something for Cane-Woman. And if the man wanted his flashlight back, he’d have to steal it from his grandmother. They were turning him into a thief. He made his lips a firm, straight line and set his expression. Ready now, he kicked the paint into a walk.

A clock chimed from somewhere inside the house as he dismounted and dusted his jeans. A sly glance at the big, black car in the drive revealed the skinny, dark-haired girl he’d noticed yesterday perched on one sleek fender watching him intently.

“I saw you yesterday. You’re Román aren’t you? My name’s Teresa. Why did you just sit there on your horse? Took you forever to come down the drive. Doesn’t your horse know how to trot? Princess does. Princess is my pony. She’s a buckskin.”

Didn’t the girl ever take a breath?

“You don’t talk much. You talk American?”

Her monologue left him flustered, but he wasn’t about to let her see. She was an addle-brain who didn’t know any better than to chatter at strangers.

“I’ve been waiting for you for simply hours. Daddy said to bring you inside when you showed up, so come on.”

“Inside?” His gut churned like a mare in foal.

“Course. You don’t expect them to come out here, do you?” She dashed away, banging the screen behind her. Román staggered up the steps but ran out of steam at the door. She reappeared, an impatient look on her angular face. “Come on! What’s the matter with you?”

The room was big and airy, not dark and dank like he’d figured. Pictures hung on the walls. The rug, as thick and soft as a buffalo robe, would make a good place to sleep. He stayed on the girl’s heels until she skipped through an open door and announced he was here.

Rigor mortis attacked his muscles; stupefaction, his brain. The impulse to run came too late. Mr. Chandler loomed before him.

“Hello, Román. We’re glad you came by.”

He doesn’t talk, Daddy.” She turned to her yellow-haired mother. “Really, Mommy.”

“Hush, child.” The woman sat in what must have been the biggest chair in the world with an open book on her lap. She was awful old to be studying like some school kid.

The girl stared at him rudely. “You act like a foreigner.”

“You’ll have to excuse her,” the rancher said. “She’s forgotten her manners.”

He already knew that. Román was glad he didn’t have a candy-stick sister like this one. She yammered like a cross squirrel as they followed her parents upstairs.

The white boy sprawled on a huge bed in a room bigger than Cane-Woman’s wickiup. The injured boy had thrown the covers back to reveal trousers that looked so soft and flimsy they’d rip if he tried to sit saddle. The right pant leg had been hacked off to accommodate a big cast. Román nearly giggled at the sight of five pink toes poking out of white plaster.

“This is the rascal who caused all the commotion last night,” Mr. Chandler said. “Román, meet Paul.”

The boy on the bed grinned despite pain lines framing his broad mouth. “Thanks for coming to the rescue.” Paul shot a hooded glance at his father. “Wasn’t supposed to be over there, so they wouldn’t have found me till buzzards started circling.” The white boy gave him a look. “How come you didn’t say anything when I saw you up on the bank of the arroyo?”

“He still doesn’t,” Teresa said.

Her brother ignored her. “Why didn’t you let me know you were going for help?”

When Román answered with a shrug, the little girl simpered. “See, what did I tell you?”

Mr. Chandler cut in. “Well, everything came out all right. Paul, don’t you have something…?”

Paul burrowed under his pillow and pulled out a small box. “Here, this is for you.”

The reward he had come for. But he was struck dumb. He couldn’t move. Teresa shoved his arm. “Go on, open it. It’s real neat. Wish I had one.”

Román lifted the lid on the box holding a gleaming band of silver inlaid with sky blue turquoise, faultless except for a delicate copper webbing.

 “It’s a friendship ring.” Paul lifted a silver chain hanging around his neck.  “There’s only two of them just alike. And see, I’ve got the other one. Means we’re friends.”

The blonde woman spoke up. “There’s a chain in the box so you can wear it around your neck until it fits.”

Teresa went into a pout. “How come I can’t have one? Can’t I be friends too, Daddy?”

“We’ll see, honey.”

Román turned his new treasure over in his hand. For sure, Cane-Woman would take it long before the ring fit his finger. Mrs. Chandler looped the gleaming circlet through the chain. Her fingernails—red as wild strawberries—tickled his neck as she fastened the clasp.

“It sure is pretty.” He knew from teachers at school the whites liked you to take on over their things.

“Aw, it’s nothing,” Paul said. “Sit down and talk to me. I get bored doing nothing all day.”

“I come play with you,” Teresa said.

“Big deal. Paper dolls yet. Come on, sit down.”

All Román wanted was escape, but he collapsed on the nearest chair when Mr. Chandler applied pressure to his shoulder. As the others drifted out of the room, Paul settled back on his pillows and indicated a plate on a bedside table.

“Have a cookie.” He made a face. “Mom makes good ones, but she still has trouble getting sugar, so they’re not as sweet as I like them.”

Román took one and thought it tasted great. Then he sat woodenly, his eyes darting around to inspect model cars and airplanes lining shelves on the walls and hanging from the ceiling… until the questions started. Whites always asked questions. Where did he live? Did he have brothers? The white boy was as rude as his sister. Soon Paul knew he was orphaned and lived with his grandmother in a gowa. Román glanced at the radio beside the bed when somebody started crooning about a prisoner of love.

“You dig Perry Como?”

“Who?” Did the kid know he wiggled his toes when he talked?

“Perry Como. The guy singing. Teresa says she’s gonna marry him someday.”

Then the Indah boy started in on his name, pronouncing it a couple of times and asking if it was Spanish. “It’s a killer-diller name, but I’m gonna call you Ro, okay?”

“Guess so.” Could one person steal another’s soul by changing his name? What would the kid think if he knew Román was really Roan Orphan, a name no white man would ever hear.

The brown machine on the table started in on “I Love You for Sentimental Reasons.” He knew that one. Somebody called Nat King Cole sang it on a portable radio at the schoolyard.

Paul must’ve got tired of trying to steal his mind and decided to play a game. He hauled out a checkerboard and started teaching Román something called chess. He had no idea what the kid was babbling about, but he wasn’t about to sit through it again. When it was clear he was lost, Paul backed up and went over the rules once more.

Román grasped the mechanics of the game but didn’t make much sense of it until he looked upon the little gadgets as warriors. Even then, the Indah boy ended up winning. Like in real life.

Finally, Mr. Chandler came to the doorway. “Can I borrow your guest a minute?”

Román jumped up; Paul made a face. “Okay, but come right back.”

He trailed the rancher down the stairs and out to the corral where Mr. Chandler nodded to two ponies. “Aren’t they beauties? Fine stock, good build, recently broke. The black’s to replace the pony we had to shoot.”

What would the white man think if he knew most of Pedro ended up in their wickiup?

“And the chestnut is yours.”

His hide-behind-face cracked. “Mine?”

Mr. Chandler indicated leather hanging over the corral fence. “And there’s a new bridle and saddle. You can take them with you when you leave.”

This would take some thinking. Cane-Woman would trade the horse before the next sunset. He stalled, claiming he’d have to fix a place for the pony. The rancher told him to leave the horse in the corral until he was ready to take him home.

Román glanced to the west and was surprised to see the sun about to drop over the horizon. His grandmother would be fretting over the reward. Besides, he had some planning to do. The ring was one thing, but he’d put up a fight for the horse.

“I gotta go.” He almost forgot his manners. “Thank you, sir.”

“You’re welcome, son. Why don’t you say goodbye to Paul before you go.”

The white boy wasn’t willing to let things end that easily. “Come back tomorrow, okay?” Román shook his head. Paul worried his lower lip between his teeth. “Well, how about the next day?” When Román stood mute, he frowned. “Well, sometime this week. I’m gonna be stuck here forever.”

A bubble building in Román’s chest burst in a flurry of words. “Can’t come back. She won’t let me.” He was doing this wrong. Why wouldn’t they let him work it out for himself?

“But the gelding, son,” Mr. Chandler said. “What about him?”

His heart stuttered in his chest. He’d been stupid and lost the big horse.

“Well, let’s see what tomorrow brings,” the rancher added. “We’ll work something out.”

The room closed around him. The air thickened. He bolted. Fleeing down the stairs in a headlong rush, he shot through the front door. Only when he was on the paint did Román glance back. The rancher and the little girl watched from the porch.

The sun abandoned the sky, and a single blue-white diamond popped out overhead. The paint pranced homeward, inspired to a faster pace by the cool air and a second helping of grass from the white man’s yard. Román fingered the silver and turquoise ring suspended around his neck on a thin chain.

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Don’t know about you, but I’m snared. Please let Don know what you think.

Stay safe and stay strong.

Now my mantra: Keep on reading and keep on writing. You have something to say… so say it!

A link to The Cutie-Pie Murders:

https://www.dropbox.com/s/ambxgy7e5ndmimk/CutiePieMurders%5BThe%5D.zip?dl=0

My personal links:

Email: don.travis@aol.com.

Facebook: www.facebook.com/donald.travis.982

Twitter: @dontravis3

See you next Thursday.

 

 Don

 New Posts every Thursday morning at 6:00 a.m. US Mountain time. 

Thursday, July 20, 2023

Chapter 3 of The Eagle’s Claw – A Guest Post

dontravis.com blog post #610


 Apparently no one’s worried about AI in the future of creative arts other than me and SAG (AI protection is one of their demands in their strike). No responses from readers.

 

Oh, well, we’ll proceed to this week’s business. My buddy Don Morgan in nearing the end of a major revision of his Enovel The Eagle’s Claw, and wants some reader reaction before he seeks commercial publication. He’s asked me to give him the next two weeks for guest posts.

 

Prior to this, we’ve seen the Prologue, Chapters 1 and 2 some time back. To ground the reader, the novel is the story of Román Otero (personal name Roan Orphan), a young mixed-blood Apache who lives with Cane-Woman, his grandmother who is believed to be a witch) on the fictional Edge of Mountain Reservation in southern New Mexico. He helps rescue the son of owner of the ranch lying just north of the rez, and is now experiencing the push and pull of the two different worlds he represents.  Here’s Chapter 3.

                                                                                                

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THE EAGLE’S CLAW

By Donald T. Morgan

Chapter 3

            The moon, a mammoth pearl suspended above the rounded breast of the dark mountains, washed the desert a delicate silver. A breeze sharpened the night air. The mare plodded along the trail home. Busy reliving the last few hours, Román was oblivious to the high desert chill and his rumbling belly.

When he’d found the Indah boy in the arroyo, he’d looked and listened and left without making a sound. A white stranger wasn’t any of his business. Shouldn’t even have been on the reservation. Yet Román had led the paint north to the white house with a red top and faced the rancher like a man, despite the thunderous pounding of his heart and a dry, raspy throat.

The huge house looked as gloomy as a cavern, but he’d liked the cars and fine horses. The yellow-haired woman was pretty, even if she was as pale as a mountain aspen. The little girl had been dark-haired like the tall rancher man.

The old mare entered a clearing in the evergreen forest well beyond other encampments and halted beside a shapeless gowa, what some called a wickiup.

Román discovered the white man’s forgotten flashlight looped around his wrist by a leather strap as he hobbled the mare. He was delivering a stern warning against wandering too far when the mournful cry of a whippoorwill sent ripples up his back. Evil birds, whippoorwills. Fooled around in the night too much. His backside puckered when an owl hooted from the tree above him. Remembering there’d been a death in the village two days ago, he swallowed his lecture and scampered through the flap of the wickiup.

His grandmother sat on a blanket beside the fire pit, her black, knobby cane in her lap. “Better get in here, Roan Orphan. He-Who-Left-Us is fighting hard to come back. Real hard.”

He noted she’d used the personal name she gave him at birth and grunted. A grunt was a useful thing. A listener made one thing of it while sometimes the grunter meant another. Román removed a small cottontail leg from a chest and settled on the blanket. His grandmother eyed the flashlight hanging from his wrist but said nothing.

She had another name, a Spanish one… Tonia Otero. But no one on the reservation called her anything but Cane-Woman. He tried to calculate how old she was. The People had been penned up with their Mescalero cousins and Navajo enemies at the Round Grove years and years and years ago. The old woman had been born on the banks of the Rio Pecos during that bad time. Or that’s what she claimed.

She might look like a parchment-covered mummy with thinning white hair and a mouthful of gums, but he wasn’t fooled. She could still raise a dust devil when she wanted to. Acrid smoke from coals in the fire pit made his nose itch.

Her rheumy eyes, almost hidden by a web of deep wrinkles, rested on him as she steadied the stem of a corncob pipe. “You go hunting today? We gonna eat tomorrow?”

She stared at him so hard he considered going back outside to face the owls and whippoorwills. “I was hunting. But I heard someone yelling for help.” He was soon lost in the telling of his adventure while the old woman listened without moving, except to pull on her pipe. When she finally spoke, it was in her own tongue.

“The Indah rancher scooped out your brains and stole what little sense you had. Tell me where that white boy’s pony fell down. We’ll go fetch it tomorrow. Then you go to that rancher’s house, ’cause he’ll pay you for what you done.”

“Don’t wanna go back.” That sounded suspiciously like rebellion. He shivered. He knew better than to fool around with Cane-Woman, but sometimes he forgot and did it anyway.

“He steal your ears like he done your brains? Do like I say. Go get paid.”

He laid the flashlight on the blanket and claimed he’d already been paid. She made a wet noise with her lips. “That ain’t nothing. He’ll pay you better’n that. Money, most likely. That’s the way they pay for everything.”

“The paper kind?” He’d had coins before, but never bills. Worth a lot of coins.

“What you done was big enough for paper money. Big enough for more’n that, but the white man won’t know no better.”

“Wish he’d give me a rifle. Then I could really hunt.” His mind made other connections. “My father was white, wasn’t he?” Ignoring her sharp look, he persisted. “Tell me about him and my mother. Tell me about the rodeo….” His voice died as the old woman hissed.

“Don’t talk about them that’s forgot. Not tonight. Not after the owls.”

He snorted even as his resolve melted away.

Cane-Woman’s flesh darkened. Veins bulged in her forehead. “Don’t make rude noises, boy. I know things you ain’t gonna learn at that school where you go waste your time.”

He wasn’t afraid of her physically. It was the other thing that put the fear-smell on him. The witch thing. Big Tom Bearclaw claimed those with the Power paid for it with human sacrifice. She had no life to give except her own—or his. He, alone, Cane-Woman called kin, and Big Tom said she’d give him to Eagle one day. Most of the time Román didn’t think about such things, but at moments like this… he wasn’t so sure.

But if Eagle gave her power, why did they go hungry and live in a camp of outcasts? Big Tom in the tipi across the clearing was a peyote shaman who’d stolen the power from another medicine man. Even though the People had avoided him like the pox for years, Tom always knew what was going on in the settlement. Was that witchcraft too?

A crippled-up old man and his wife lived in the little house south of the tipi. Some said the old goat was a bad witch whose medicine arrows got shot back at him. That’s why he was twisted and his woman messed up in the head.

Cane-Woman’s voice startled him. “She-Who-Was-My-Daughter’s gone away. Taken by a devil horse. That’s all you gotta know.” She always avoided speaking directly of her dead offspring. “Go see the rancher man tomorrow. Then don’t go there no more. He-Who-Was-Your-Pa didn’t find no happiness here. And you ain’t gonna find none in the white man’s house.”

He blinked. “I don’t even know the rancher man’s name.”

“Chandler. Name’s Chandler.”

She snatched up the flashlight and made him show her how to turn it on. Waving it in front of her, she spread fresh ashes around the edges of the wickiup and laid sage across the doorway to strengthen protection against ashee… ghosts.

Relieved the storm had passed so easily, Román finished the rabbit leg, flipped the bone into the fire, and carefully wiped greasy hands on his trousers before stretching out on his blankets. Slipping away into sleep, he barely heard her shaky voice.

          “This here’s a right fine light. Expect I’ll keep it.”

         Then he descended into a restless, unsettling dream.

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So the push-pull now begins on this ten-year-old boy whose exposure to the white man has heretofore been limited to teachers on the reservation school. The fact his grandmother lives so much in the past doesn’t help… not to mention she’s widely regarded and feared as a witch.

 Please let Don know what you think.

Stay safe and stay strong.

Now my mantra: Keep on reading and keep on writing. You have something to say… so say it!

A link to The Cutie-Pie Murders:

https://www.dropbox.com/s/ambxgy7e5ndmimk/CutiePieMurders%5BThe%5D.zip?dl=0

My personal links:

Email: don.travis@aol.com.

Facebook: www.facebook.com/donald.travis.982

Twitter: @dontravis3

See you next Thursday.

 

 Don

 New Posts every Thursday morning at 6:00 a.m. US Mountain time.  

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